Post by Okan on Jul 18, 2007 17:43:52 GMT
For this account, I'm going to use two people. Me (Okan) and Ben. It will be in first person, so when I do...
Okan...It means it's my view. If it's...
Ben..It's Ben's view.... So sit back and relax, as you will discover the fight with Okan, Ben and the Pudhi monster and 'Half a Secret' of the PM. It might seem a bit fantasized, but it wasn't intended to be real anyway.
This is probably the most bloody of all the PM accounts I've done. It may also be long, but better then the rest, personally.
[glow=red,2,300]YOU'VE BEEN WARNED![/glow]
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Okan
End of school. Exiting physics, me and Ben left the class and began our long walk down the drive.
"So...Jayven. How come your coming down here?" Sukhpal asked. I wondered that also. Jayven always went down Cartland, but now he decided not to.
"Errrr...Some messed up shit happened by the bridge once, so I'm going this way instead," Jayven replied. Everyone shrugged their shoulders not knowing what the 'messed up shit' was and continued walking down. Once we was half way, I gripped my right hand expecting to feel my clarinet case but it wasn't there.
"Aw crap. I forgot my Clarinet case again. f**k!" I stopped, but the others continued walking apart from Ben.
"I'll walk back with you," Ben said.
"You sure? You can go ahead with the the others if you want," I answered knowing that there was coursework in for tomorrow.
"I'm sure," Ben grinned ad the two of us sprinted back up the drive and through the girl's playground, until we entered school. I had left it in my locker, so I dashed along the corridor with Ben, and up the stairs until we reached the form room. LOCKED! I banged my head onto the door.
"Yo dude. Chill. I'll go get a cleaner from the cloakroom," Ben smiled as I slumped down the door and waited for Ben to come back with an immigrant cleaner.
Ben
Leaving Okan behind, I bolted down the stairs and nearly slipped. Woah Regaining my balance, I continued to dash along the corridors until I entered the cloakroom. Everyone had left. It was silent. The sound of a pin could be heard. My ears started to heighten in sense, and then...BANG!...A broom had fallen on the floor and a small Chinese lady stood there.
"Err....Excuse me. Could you please come upstairs and unlock our door please. My friend has left something in his locker," I asked politely. The women smiled and replied something. I didn't understand a word she said, but I smiled back, unaware that for all I know, she could be swearing at me.
After a couple of minutes walk to the form room. (The small Chinese lady was slow and her legs couldn't carry her that far) Okan still layed there, eyes shut. I grinned then slapped his cheeks.
"Yo dude, wake up," I said. Okan darted up, he looked confused then once he saw me and the Chinese lady he smiled.
"Oh sorry, my eyes relaxed," Okan laughed then the small lady opened the door. Okan entered the room and I tagged behind. The lady stood outside the door and waited until we had finished. Opening the locker, Okan retrieved his clarinet case and a low muffled sound could be heard from outside. I ignored for a moment then a scraping sound was heard. I tapped Okan on the shoulder.
"Dude. You hear that?" I asked. Okan nodded, "We better check this out," Okan said anxiously.
Okan
I held my clarinet case tightly in my hand and I edged closer to the door. It was shut. Gripping the handle, a cold sensation was felt. Twisting the knob, i slowly opened the door. My heart raced for some unknown reason and after opening the door, my heart stopped.
"What the f**k?!" Ben shrieked. I couldn't speak.
BLOOD!
Blood was smeared on the door handle and the floor was full of it. I touched the blood and is was still fairly fresh. My eyes darted to Ben, then his to mine.
"THE CHINESE LADY!" We both said at exactly the same time. I wiped the blood off my finger, and the blood seemed to lead somewhere. She was dragged out I thought. I opened the double doors and i gazed down the steps. The trail of blood continued and it lead past Room 4 through the other doors. I slowly walked down the steps. There was no rush in finding out what did this. It must some sort of sadistic person. My first thoughts was the two Jakes, then I gave myself a weak grin. Down the steps, I saw another trail of blood coming from the science laboratories that lead the same way.
"Dude, this is some freaky shit," Ben said. My whole body was freezing. I breathed a couple of times then opened the double doors leading down a corridor. All of a sudden, the lights went out. PITCH BLACK An odd flicker of light came from above. Ahead I saw more blood all leading towards the cloakroom. The blood seemed to glow an eerie red. Ben gripped me.
"This is f**king weird dude," Ben said as he gripped tighter onto me. "Dude, chill. It's probably some prank," I said reassuringly. But deep inside, I knew this was no prank.
Ben
I released my grip and gave a weak grin to Okan. We slowly walked down towards the corridor, trying not to slip on the blood. A fowl stench was no smelt and I closed my nose, however Okan rushed to the side and puked. I smiled then Okan and I continued walking towards the cloakroom. The toilet doors were stained in blood. It looked as if someone gripped onto it for their dear lives. A shiver ran down my spine and I opened the double doors leading to the cloakroom. The stench got thicker. Blood was now everywhere. Okan and I edged ever so closer to the centre when my heart jumped.
"What.....The.....f**k?!" Okan shouted. Corpses lay in the centre of the cloakroom. Blood dripped from all of them. And right at the top, the Chinese lady lay still. Lifeless. Blood trickling from her mouth. And next to the pile of corpses was a naked person. It licked blood off one of the corpses then it's eyes darted towards us. Shit was going down
Okan
My eyes could not believe what it was witnessing. It the pitch black, the corpses seemed to be emitting light. Red light. BLOOD. I instantly recognized the thing as it stood naked in front of us. Ben was now shaking beyond belief. it was the PUDHI MONSTER. I had heard small rumors about this thing and how it supposedly 'killed' Andrew, but it all seemed a load of bullshit. This was no bullshit. Beneath the pile of slaughtered corpses was Andrew's. Flies circled around him. Inside I felt happy. Andrew was a prick. But seeing him like this. Dead. Gone. My happiness turned to sorrow. I quickly turned my gaze away from Andrew and looked at the Pudhi Monster.
"What do you want? I asked the PM. It stared at me through it's veil. It's penis became erect and soon it crouched down. Ben picked up a pen and threw it towards the PM. It caught it with ease.
"Ben. If your gonna show your hate, then at least throw something better then a pen," I whispered to Ben. He grinned. The PM, closed it's eyes and soon it was muttering something. My eyes widened. Th Pudhi Monster had made a carbon copy of itself. Now there was two of them. Both of them stood up and smiled at me and Ben.
"Pudipudipudipudiyouwilldiepudipudi," It said. I couldn't make out what it was saying. But then each of them came after us. One went after me and the other after Ben. This shit was getting serious
Ben
In a minute or two, or would end up like the corpses. Dead. The PM gave an evil grin at me and leaped towards me. Eyes widening, I dashed away through the dark, towards the canteen. I knew Okan would have to handle this himself. Entering the Canteen, I sprinted to the end. I breathed heavily and picked up some cutlery. My eyes had slowly gotten use to the dark and soon, a slam of the door was heard. My heart raced, and soon a warm sensation was felt around my neck.
"Pudipudipudipudi," I flew forwards and smashed into a table. The PM was behind me. It's penis now down. It spat blood out it's mouth from the corpses and advanced towards me. Now I have to use some fighting skills that I do with the Jakes I held some cutlery in my hand and threw all of them towards the PM. Flying at speed, the knives and forks met their target. One grazed the PM's shoulder. One missed and the other lodged itself into the PM's penis. It showed no signs of pain. My eyes widened. WHAT...THE...f**k! The PM casually took out the knife from it's penis and licked the shoulders wound. It wouldn't give up. I dashed towards the PM and pushed off a table and kicked it in the face. Falling back, the PM lay on the floor. I took out a knife and heaved it into the PM's leg. It shrieked in agony and pushed me back, sending me flying into another table. I groaned in pain and saw the PM limp away to the Cloakroom.
Okan
The 2nd PM leaped at me. Before I had time to get out the way, it pinned me down in front of the team photos. It unzipped my trousers and revealed my penis. Getting low, it prepared to give me head. My heart was beating ferociously and instinctively, I punched the PM away. I breathed a sign of relief and quickly did up my trousers.
"No mother f**ker mess' with me, biatch," I grinned. I took out my clarinet case, and assembled my clarinet.
"This mother f**king instrument finally has a proper use," I smiled at the PM. It spat on the floor and sprinted towards me. As it came closer I swung my clarinet to it's stomach and it made solid contact. It flew back and landed with the corpses. From my right, the other PM appeared with blood rushing out it's leg. I grinned. Then Ben appeared from the Canteen.
"Come back you dick. I ain't finished with you," Ben shouted, then he caught a glimpse of me and smiled.
"Dude, your OK," I grinned back at him.
The two PM stood next to each other and with more muttering, they combined to show the original PM, with no injures. My jaw dropped. Man this thing it f**ked I locked gazes with Ben and we both had the same thing in mind. KICK IT'S ASS We both nodded and dashed towards the PM and within a meter apart, we both delivered a flying kick to the PM, sending it hurtling back. I pounced in quick, and catching a knife thrown from Ben, cut open half the Pudhi Monster's veil revealing half a face. I moved back, astounded. It had blue eyes and white hair. But it was not clear with the blood around and the darkness. It grinned at me and quickly dashed away. I slumped to the ground. My head coming between my knees. Ben came near me and crouched down.
"Dude. Who was that?" Ben asked. I had a clue but I didn't dare say.
"I dunno Ben. I couldn't make it out," I replied. I wiped blood from my face and slowly got up.
"Man. This was one f**ked up day," Ben said and we slowly left the bloody school, waiting for the screams and cries in the morning...
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*And breath*
Finally this parts finished. I hope you enjoyed it guys. And the ending wasn't rushed if thats what you thought.
Comments welcome.
Okan...It means it's my view. If it's...
Ben..It's Ben's view.... So sit back and relax, as you will discover the fight with Okan, Ben and the Pudhi monster and 'Half a Secret' of the PM. It might seem a bit fantasized, but it wasn't intended to be real anyway.
This is probably the most bloody of all the PM accounts I've done. It may also be long, but better then the rest, personally.
[glow=red,2,300]YOU'VE BEEN WARNED![/glow]
******************************** ********************************
Okan
End of school. Exiting physics, me and Ben left the class and began our long walk down the drive.
"So...Jayven. How come your coming down here?" Sukhpal asked. I wondered that also. Jayven always went down Cartland, but now he decided not to.
"Errrr...Some messed up shit happened by the bridge once, so I'm going this way instead," Jayven replied. Everyone shrugged their shoulders not knowing what the 'messed up shit' was and continued walking down. Once we was half way, I gripped my right hand expecting to feel my clarinet case but it wasn't there.
"Aw crap. I forgot my Clarinet case again. f**k!" I stopped, but the others continued walking apart from Ben.
"I'll walk back with you," Ben said.
"You sure? You can go ahead with the the others if you want," I answered knowing that there was coursework in for tomorrow.
"I'm sure," Ben grinned ad the two of us sprinted back up the drive and through the girl's playground, until we entered school. I had left it in my locker, so I dashed along the corridor with Ben, and up the stairs until we reached the form room. LOCKED! I banged my head onto the door.
"Yo dude. Chill. I'll go get a cleaner from the cloakroom," Ben smiled as I slumped down the door and waited for Ben to come back with an immigrant cleaner.
Ben
Leaving Okan behind, I bolted down the stairs and nearly slipped. Woah Regaining my balance, I continued to dash along the corridors until I entered the cloakroom. Everyone had left. It was silent. The sound of a pin could be heard. My ears started to heighten in sense, and then...BANG!...A broom had fallen on the floor and a small Chinese lady stood there.
"Err....Excuse me. Could you please come upstairs and unlock our door please. My friend has left something in his locker," I asked politely. The women smiled and replied something. I didn't understand a word she said, but I smiled back, unaware that for all I know, she could be swearing at me.
After a couple of minutes walk to the form room. (The small Chinese lady was slow and her legs couldn't carry her that far) Okan still layed there, eyes shut. I grinned then slapped his cheeks.
"Yo dude, wake up," I said. Okan darted up, he looked confused then once he saw me and the Chinese lady he smiled.
"Oh sorry, my eyes relaxed," Okan laughed then the small lady opened the door. Okan entered the room and I tagged behind. The lady stood outside the door and waited until we had finished. Opening the locker, Okan retrieved his clarinet case and a low muffled sound could be heard from outside. I ignored for a moment then a scraping sound was heard. I tapped Okan on the shoulder.
"Dude. You hear that?" I asked. Okan nodded, "We better check this out," Okan said anxiously.
Okan
I held my clarinet case tightly in my hand and I edged closer to the door. It was shut. Gripping the handle, a cold sensation was felt. Twisting the knob, i slowly opened the door. My heart raced for some unknown reason and after opening the door, my heart stopped.
"What the f**k?!" Ben shrieked. I couldn't speak.
BLOOD!
Blood was smeared on the door handle and the floor was full of it. I touched the blood and is was still fairly fresh. My eyes darted to Ben, then his to mine.
"THE CHINESE LADY!" We both said at exactly the same time. I wiped the blood off my finger, and the blood seemed to lead somewhere. She was dragged out I thought. I opened the double doors and i gazed down the steps. The trail of blood continued and it lead past Room 4 through the other doors. I slowly walked down the steps. There was no rush in finding out what did this. It must some sort of sadistic person. My first thoughts was the two Jakes, then I gave myself a weak grin. Down the steps, I saw another trail of blood coming from the science laboratories that lead the same way.
"Dude, this is some freaky shit," Ben said. My whole body was freezing. I breathed a couple of times then opened the double doors leading down a corridor. All of a sudden, the lights went out. PITCH BLACK An odd flicker of light came from above. Ahead I saw more blood all leading towards the cloakroom. The blood seemed to glow an eerie red. Ben gripped me.
"This is f**king weird dude," Ben said as he gripped tighter onto me. "Dude, chill. It's probably some prank," I said reassuringly. But deep inside, I knew this was no prank.
Ben
I released my grip and gave a weak grin to Okan. We slowly walked down towards the corridor, trying not to slip on the blood. A fowl stench was no smelt and I closed my nose, however Okan rushed to the side and puked. I smiled then Okan and I continued walking towards the cloakroom. The toilet doors were stained in blood. It looked as if someone gripped onto it for their dear lives. A shiver ran down my spine and I opened the double doors leading to the cloakroom. The stench got thicker. Blood was now everywhere. Okan and I edged ever so closer to the centre when my heart jumped.
"What.....The.....f**k?!" Okan shouted. Corpses lay in the centre of the cloakroom. Blood dripped from all of them. And right at the top, the Chinese lady lay still. Lifeless. Blood trickling from her mouth. And next to the pile of corpses was a naked person. It licked blood off one of the corpses then it's eyes darted towards us. Shit was going down
Okan
My eyes could not believe what it was witnessing. It the pitch black, the corpses seemed to be emitting light. Red light. BLOOD. I instantly recognized the thing as it stood naked in front of us. Ben was now shaking beyond belief. it was the PUDHI MONSTER. I had heard small rumors about this thing and how it supposedly 'killed' Andrew, but it all seemed a load of bullshit. This was no bullshit. Beneath the pile of slaughtered corpses was Andrew's. Flies circled around him. Inside I felt happy. Andrew was a prick. But seeing him like this. Dead. Gone. My happiness turned to sorrow. I quickly turned my gaze away from Andrew and looked at the Pudhi Monster.
"What do you want? I asked the PM. It stared at me through it's veil. It's penis became erect and soon it crouched down. Ben picked up a pen and threw it towards the PM. It caught it with ease.
"Ben. If your gonna show your hate, then at least throw something better then a pen," I whispered to Ben. He grinned. The PM, closed it's eyes and soon it was muttering something. My eyes widened. Th Pudhi Monster had made a carbon copy of itself. Now there was two of them. Both of them stood up and smiled at me and Ben.
"Pudipudipudipudiyouwilldiepudipudi," It said. I couldn't make out what it was saying. But then each of them came after us. One went after me and the other after Ben. This shit was getting serious
Ben
In a minute or two, or would end up like the corpses. Dead. The PM gave an evil grin at me and leaped towards me. Eyes widening, I dashed away through the dark, towards the canteen. I knew Okan would have to handle this himself. Entering the Canteen, I sprinted to the end. I breathed heavily and picked up some cutlery. My eyes had slowly gotten use to the dark and soon, a slam of the door was heard. My heart raced, and soon a warm sensation was felt around my neck.
"Pudipudipudipudi," I flew forwards and smashed into a table. The PM was behind me. It's penis now down. It spat blood out it's mouth from the corpses and advanced towards me. Now I have to use some fighting skills that I do with the Jakes I held some cutlery in my hand and threw all of them towards the PM. Flying at speed, the knives and forks met their target. One grazed the PM's shoulder. One missed and the other lodged itself into the PM's penis. It showed no signs of pain. My eyes widened. WHAT...THE...f**k! The PM casually took out the knife from it's penis and licked the shoulders wound. It wouldn't give up. I dashed towards the PM and pushed off a table and kicked it in the face. Falling back, the PM lay on the floor. I took out a knife and heaved it into the PM's leg. It shrieked in agony and pushed me back, sending me flying into another table. I groaned in pain and saw the PM limp away to the Cloakroom.
Okan
The 2nd PM leaped at me. Before I had time to get out the way, it pinned me down in front of the team photos. It unzipped my trousers and revealed my penis. Getting low, it prepared to give me head. My heart was beating ferociously and instinctively, I punched the PM away. I breathed a sign of relief and quickly did up my trousers.
"No mother f**ker mess' with me, biatch," I grinned. I took out my clarinet case, and assembled my clarinet.
"This mother f**king instrument finally has a proper use," I smiled at the PM. It spat on the floor and sprinted towards me. As it came closer I swung my clarinet to it's stomach and it made solid contact. It flew back and landed with the corpses. From my right, the other PM appeared with blood rushing out it's leg. I grinned. Then Ben appeared from the Canteen.
"Come back you dick. I ain't finished with you," Ben shouted, then he caught a glimpse of me and smiled.
"Dude, your OK," I grinned back at him.
The two PM stood next to each other and with more muttering, they combined to show the original PM, with no injures. My jaw dropped. Man this thing it f**ked I locked gazes with Ben and we both had the same thing in mind. KICK IT'S ASS We both nodded and dashed towards the PM and within a meter apart, we both delivered a flying kick to the PM, sending it hurtling back. I pounced in quick, and catching a knife thrown from Ben, cut open half the Pudhi Monster's veil revealing half a face. I moved back, astounded. It had blue eyes and white hair. But it was not clear with the blood around and the darkness. It grinned at me and quickly dashed away. I slumped to the ground. My head coming between my knees. Ben came near me and crouched down.
"Dude. Who was that?" Ben asked. I had a clue but I didn't dare say.
"I dunno Ben. I couldn't make it out," I replied. I wiped blood from my face and slowly got up.
"Man. This was one f**ked up day," Ben said and we slowly left the bloody school, waiting for the screams and cries in the morning...
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*And breath*
Finally this parts finished. I hope you enjoyed it guys. And the ending wasn't rushed if thats what you thought.
Comments welcome.
