Post by Okan on Jul 17, 2007 16:17:46 GMT
After Cameron's rape, the Pudhi Monster needed a new victim. An easy target. NURAN Sevana-wat-not....
(As most people seemed to like the first person view rather then third, I will, from now on, stick with 1st.)
Wednesday 18th January
I hail pounded on the window. The heavy beating of it gave a constant beat. Waking up, I immediately got dressed. First my trousers, then my shirt and tie, then my blazer, and finally, not forgetting, my dirty sweatband. Looking outside, I see snow. The white powder looked soft, and the hail was only an after shower. Skipping breakfast, I rush to the bus stop, my feet crunching through the snow.
BANG!!
"Whatthef**kwasthat!?" I cursed and fell to the floor. A numb feeling was felt on my left cheek and melted snow dripped down my neck. Ahead of me was a young boy. Barely past 10. Giving him a glare. I made a snowball.
"Whyyouliitlegayboy," the boy looked at me confused, not understanding my speech. Lobbing the snow, it smashed into the little boys face, leaving cuts and bruises. Shit I dashed away through the snow and got onto the bus. People stared at me. A little kid pointed and laughed and then a group of Five-ways kids started too.
"Ha! Look at his hair. It's SO gay," I charged upstairs ignoring the insults and slumped onto a seat. After 20mins of people laughing and slapping me, I quickly got off the bus. Running down Cartland Road, some year sevens started to throw snowballs at me. I ducked down and sprinted to school, only to skid and smash my face into the snow. Groaning, I quickly I got up and made for the form room.
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The end of school finally came. My hands were purple and bruised. Sukhpal and Benedict had shoved snow down my back and Okan had pushed snow into my face.
"Thisisracialabuseguys," I said. Cameron butted in,
"Ha,mynamesNuranSevaeratneandIspeakreallyquicksonooneunderstandsme," everyone burst out laughing except for me. As they left, I stayed back a bit to go to the toilet. Entering the stinking place, only the Chinese cleaner was there.
"Err....Do you...err...lick...me out?" I looked at her weirdly and slowly backed out the toilet and stopped in the cloakroom. 4:30?! I took out my I-pod and put it into my blazer. I listened to some music. Rock, emo style of course.
#Kill the mother f**king people!!#
#Kill all who rape all!#
#Slit your wrists and suck yourself!#
I dunno why Sukh and Ben take the piss out my music. It's awesome. Exiting the school, I spot a figure on the field. I saw a boy or something like that, crawled up on the field. I sprinted over to the thing and as I got closer it started to rise. It was naked. The only bit of clothing on it was a black veil covering it's head. It grinned at me. My music was still banging in the background.
#Oi you, kill your parents#
#Rape your dad, and suck your sister#
#Aararararrrgghhhhh!!!!#
The thing started to get closer. It's penis slowly started to get erect and I started to panic. I backed away, however I tripped on a rock and fell back up the bank.
"Nopleasedon'tgetme," I shouted, but like everyone else that listens to me, the thing raised an eyebrow not understanding me. It came closer until it turned me around and took off my trousers. I tried struggling but it was no good.
#Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah#
#Kill! Kill! Kil......#
The thing had removed my head phones and had tied it around my head.
[glow=red,2,300]"Pudipudipudiifyoustrugglepudipudiyoudiepudipudi,"[/glow] I couldn't make out what it was saying but then, it penetrated into me. It started to dig in and out. I tried struggling away, but then the grip around my neck got tighter. I resisted and let the thing get in charge. I started to enjoy it, but I shook away that thought. I was getting raped for gods sake. It stopped. I ass felt cold. The hairs around my body started to stick on end, and the thing grinned at me and spat. Leaving me to freeze out here all alone...
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As you can see Nuran's speech was inaudible and the Pudhi monster said, if you couldn't read it....
"If you struggle, you die."
Comments appreciated.
(As most people seemed to like the first person view rather then third, I will, from now on, stick with 1st.)
Wednesday 18th January
I hail pounded on the window. The heavy beating of it gave a constant beat. Waking up, I immediately got dressed. First my trousers, then my shirt and tie, then my blazer, and finally, not forgetting, my dirty sweatband. Looking outside, I see snow. The white powder looked soft, and the hail was only an after shower. Skipping breakfast, I rush to the bus stop, my feet crunching through the snow.
BANG!!
"Whatthef**kwasthat!?" I cursed and fell to the floor. A numb feeling was felt on my left cheek and melted snow dripped down my neck. Ahead of me was a young boy. Barely past 10. Giving him a glare. I made a snowball.
"Whyyouliitlegayboy," the boy looked at me confused, not understanding my speech. Lobbing the snow, it smashed into the little boys face, leaving cuts and bruises. Shit I dashed away through the snow and got onto the bus. People stared at me. A little kid pointed and laughed and then a group of Five-ways kids started too.
"Ha! Look at his hair. It's SO gay," I charged upstairs ignoring the insults and slumped onto a seat. After 20mins of people laughing and slapping me, I quickly got off the bus. Running down Cartland Road, some year sevens started to throw snowballs at me. I ducked down and sprinted to school, only to skid and smash my face into the snow. Groaning, I quickly I got up and made for the form room.
********************************************************************************************************
The end of school finally came. My hands were purple and bruised. Sukhpal and Benedict had shoved snow down my back and Okan had pushed snow into my face.
"Thisisracialabuseguys," I said. Cameron butted in,
"Ha,mynamesNuranSevaeratneandIspeakreallyquicksonooneunderstandsme," everyone burst out laughing except for me. As they left, I stayed back a bit to go to the toilet. Entering the stinking place, only the Chinese cleaner was there.
"Err....Do you...err...lick...me out?" I looked at her weirdly and slowly backed out the toilet and stopped in the cloakroom. 4:30?! I took out my I-pod and put it into my blazer. I listened to some music. Rock, emo style of course.
#Kill the mother f**king people!!#
#Kill all who rape all!#
#Slit your wrists and suck yourself!#
I dunno why Sukh and Ben take the piss out my music. It's awesome. Exiting the school, I spot a figure on the field. I saw a boy or something like that, crawled up on the field. I sprinted over to the thing and as I got closer it started to rise. It was naked. The only bit of clothing on it was a black veil covering it's head. It grinned at me. My music was still banging in the background.
#Oi you, kill your parents#
#Rape your dad, and suck your sister#
#Aararararrrgghhhhh!!!!#
The thing started to get closer. It's penis slowly started to get erect and I started to panic. I backed away, however I tripped on a rock and fell back up the bank.
"Nopleasedon'tgetme," I shouted, but like everyone else that listens to me, the thing raised an eyebrow not understanding me. It came closer until it turned me around and took off my trousers. I tried struggling but it was no good.
#Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah#
#Kill! Kill! Kil......#
The thing had removed my head phones and had tied it around my head.
[glow=red,2,300]"Pudipudipudiifyoustrugglepudipudiyoudiepudipudi,"[/glow] I couldn't make out what it was saying but then, it penetrated into me. It started to dig in and out. I tried struggling away, but then the grip around my neck got tighter. I resisted and let the thing get in charge. I started to enjoy it, but I shook away that thought. I was getting raped for gods sake. It stopped. I ass felt cold. The hairs around my body started to stick on end, and the thing grinned at me and spat. Leaving me to freeze out here all alone...
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As you can see Nuran's speech was inaudible and the Pudhi monster said, if you couldn't read it....
"If you struggle, you die."
Comments appreciated.
