Cameron's Account

[Okan]

After Andrew's bloody 'rape,' Cameron was next in line. This account was completely shocking. It is totally unexpected and after this the Pudhi Monster did not hassled Cameron again...Or will he??

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[glow=blue,2,300]((Note: I'm testing out third person on Cam to see if it's better then First. Comments about which is better would be helpful.))[/glow]

Monday. Cameron woke up after his messed up night. Sex, drugs, alcohol, sex and more drugs resulted in a f**ked hangover and a pretty messed morning. On the bus, Cam sat next to Okan. Listening to music and poking Okan, Cam soon got off at Mills. Entering the shop alongside Okan, he shoved some Trident into Okan's pocket and he too stole some M&Ms. (M&M's are becoming a common thing in these PM threads. Anyway....) Leaving the shop unnoticed they both started to walk up the drive. Okan beat-boxing and Cam spitting lyrics (Rapping) they did some 'bum ting' tunes when Mrs. Watts overheard them.

"Lads, that sounded quite good. Cam see me in the art room at 1:05. I got something for you," and with that Mrs. Watts walked ahead of the confuzzled Okan and excited Cam. Giving Okan a nudge Cam started rapping again.

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Lunchtime. Cam exited from an evermore boring Maths lesson and went straight to the Art room all excited. Entering he saw no-one in there. WTF Cam thought but then heard sounds coming from the art store room on his left. Entering he saw a half naked thing. From behind, only it's backside and black veil covering it's head could be seen. Cam licked his lips. He had 'pretended' to rape people in 10x who sat down, but this time he actually could. He unzipped his trousers and brought his dick close to the things backside. The PM still was unaware of Cam behind it. Penetrating the ass, Cam started to push in and out. Moans and groans being heard. The PM looked confused. He continued to 'masturbate' but Cam continued to rape it. Moving away, Cam gave the thing a soft growl and pulled his trousers up. The PM snarled at the departing Cam and threw a knife at the door showing his anger towards him.
"PudipudipudipudiCamwillpaypudipudipudi," was all the Pudhi monster said....

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As you can see, Cam was the raper and the Pudhi monster for the first time said something.....If you can read it.

Comments appreciated. First or third person?

[Jake R]

i think first person is better for this sort of thing and i also think you should make it longer, as in adding the Pudhi monster getting revenge right Now, but you could just do it later.
Anyway it was pretty good.

[Okan]

Thanks for the consructive criticism.

[Benedict]

Yeah kill cameron off.... he's a gay

[Okan]

Thats what I was planning to do Ben...because Cam enjoyed it so he is goona die.

Now I need some ideas on how to kill him. Fire them at me...

[Benedict]

Stab him

[Okan]

Yep, will do.